Some people call it insta-love. It’s a criticism of books and movies where
the audience is expected to believe the main characters are truly in love way
too soon, within days if not hours of meeting the beloved.
As a romance fan, I’ve rolled my eyes at many examples of
this. I’ve read that a heroine knew she
was madly in love because of a light-headed feeling. I wanted someone in the book to ask her if
she was sure she hadn’t just stood up too fast.
That can happen. I’ve been told
characters were in love when they’d barely had a conversation because of all
the things their eyes had communicated.
That is called infatuation. A gaze
across a room doesn’t say if he’ll mock her religious beliefs or if she’ll want
him to quit his job to raise donkeys in the desert.
And I can’t say how many times I’ve watched that movie where
a young woman has to return home to the family [ranch, B&B, vineyard, farm,
flower shop, etc.] for some big event.
(I can’t say partly because I’ve lost count and partly because it’s an embarrassing
admission.) She meets a guy who is
either the competition or trying to shut down the business. No matter what contrived conflicts or
ridiculous misunderstandings arise in the two or three days before the event,
she is madly in love with him at the end because, well, because she said so.
Let’s not analyze that any further. I’m not trying to sharpen my knives
here. These examples are brought up in
fun to illustrate something I try to avoid in my work. Yes, my books are fluffy and
light-hearted. But they still need to
hold to the truth that real love takes time to develop. Superficial relationships aren’t funny. You need to know someone before you know what
makes him laugh and before you know how to push her buttons.
There are two ways to avoid insta-love. The first is to establish that the main
characters knew each other before the story started. Maybe they’ve been friends for a while, maybe
they have shared history. When there is
already some sort of relationship, I can use a short timeline to create a
romantic shift. Pop quiz: Name the books
in which I’ve used this strategy.
The other, and in my opinion more difficult, option is to
stretch out the timeline. I can’t do
that by simply including a sentence that begins with “six months later.” Readers will want to know what happened in
those six months. I will want to
know what happened in those six months.
The rest of the book is going to be weird when I make references readers
don’t understand or have characters who don’t seem to have said or done
anything in all that time.
Another terrible way to jump ahead is to pick random days to
illustrate. Here’s what happened on this
day, and two weeks later there was this other event. Then I’ll show you what happened on a day
with snow so you’ll know it’s later in the year. My couple will be getting along great and readers
will be happy to see them holding hands.
No one will care that we missed the first time he reached for her or how
they resolved that issue that caused an argument on the warmer day. Right?
Even worse would be a complete summary of events. I could simply inform readers that she agreed
to spend a lot of time with him, that he said some sweet words at some point,
and now it’s time to believe they’re headed for happily ever after. It doesn’t work to say it isn’t insta-love.
So if those are some of the wrong ways to move the timeline
ahead, what is a right way? It’s all of
the above. I mix up the wrong ways – a bit
of skipping, a bit of summarizing, and even a bit of randomness – and hopefully
end up with a plot that gives the characters enough time to start to love each
other without missing any of the highlights.
This is why it’s difficult. I
have to squeeze all these lemon ideas into sweet lemonade. If I squeeze too hard, I’ll end up with seeds
and pulp in the story. Or I’ll just ruin
the metaphor.
